My Favorite place

Before

Well, My favorite space was pc room. After school when i was high school,
I just ran to the pc room. As soon as i arrived at pc room, I ordered ice tea and ramen.
In that time, that is best meal for me.
I think korea pc room is the best in the world.
wherever you go in korea, you can find pc room anywhere.
But nowadays, I cannot go pc room. Because Im too busy to go to pc room.
I think this is the process of child to adult.
But I like being adult than being child. Although I can't go pc room, I take more reponsibility now.
That is an honor to me.

After

Well, My favorite place was pc room. After school when i was in high school,
I just ran to the pc room. As soon as I arrived there, I ordered iced tea and ramen.
at that time, that the was best meal for me.
I think south Korea's pc room is the best in the world.
wherever you go in korea, you can find pc room anywhere.
But nowadays, I cannot go to the pc room. Because Im too busy to go there.
I think this is the process from being child to adult.
But I like being adult than being child. Although I can't go to the pc room, I take more reponsibility now,
that is an honor for me.

After #2

Well, My favorite place was pc room. when i was in high school, after school
I just ran to the pc room. As soon as I arrived there, I ordered iced tea and ramen.
at that time, that was the best meal for me.
I think south Korea's pc room is the best in the world.
wherever you go in korea, you can find pc room anywhere.
But nowadays, I cannot go to the pc room. Because Im too busy to go there.
I sometimes miss that time.
But you know , there's a time for everything.
I cannot go pc room but instead
I have other things to do in here and I'm satisfied.

수정사항

1. space -> place
2. i was high school -> i was in high school
3. 중복을 피하기. pc room -> there
4. in that time-> at that time
5. That -> 이어지는 문장에서 지칭하는거면 문장 이어주기

형식에 맞추어 말하는게 중요하지 전하려는 메세지는 중요하지 않다.
평문을 말하듯이, 잡담하듯이 해야한다.

다음 토픽

제일 좋아하는 장소, 몇번 가는지, 왜 좋아하는지

피드백

1. 강약강약 -> 중중중중
2. 구문을 먼저 떠올린다음에 말하기
3. of the... 같이 입에 붙은 말 먼저 하지 말고, 생각한것만 말하기
4. 빠르게 말하려고 하지 말고, 정확하게 말하려고 하기
5. 끝음 떨어진다. 반음 올려서 끝내기.

6. 한 호흡으로 읽기

오픽노잼

https://youtu.be/W1Cdg5A1vlU

• hey~~~로 시작하기

• my name is-> im

• 오픽은 평상문을 주고 받는 시험

• i love with my family -> i love my family
  전치사 남용x
  내가 because of 많이 쓰는 것 처럼
  확실히 의미를 옮겨야 한다

• i love my family -> im a family man
  동사로 설명하려고 하기 보다
  명사로 설명이 더 영어적

• 중복 -> 대명사로 말하는것이 중요