OPIC 준비 #4

임얼쑤·2020년 11월 17일
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빨간색처럼 올라가면 목 압박이 크다

파란색처럼 아래에서 올라가야함

  1. 머리 앞쪽이 아니라, 위쪽, 그리고 좀 뒤쪽으로 뻗어나가는 느낌. 머리통 전체를 쓰는 느낌

앞쪽으로 하면 성대접지가 어긋나는 느낌이 있다.

  1. 목이 열려서 통로가 되는 느낌으로 해야한다

  2. 뱉듯이 해야함

Before

My Frist hobby is taking a walk. when i'm studying for my major, I often feel pressured.
So, when i feel like that, i want to go outside and take a walk.
When I start walking, I feel more comfortable.
I'm not thinking about my major or any complicated things, and just seeing people walking around the street.
in doing that, bad thoughts in my head are blown away.
When I get back home after walking, I have more attention about my work.

My second hobby is listening to music.
you know, Im studying for server developer so half of my day I'm typing a code.
coding is interesting, but i often get bored.
So I listend to music not to get that statement.
Not only typing the code but also listing to music makes my attension keeping good.
I think i listen to music about 4 or 5 hours in a day.
My favorite genre is hiphop music and my favorite artist is asap rocky.
he is a famous rapper, fashion model and also my role model.
I recommand his song, the name asap forever.
i hope you enjoy this song. thank you.

Ater

My Frist hobby is taking a walk. when i'm studying for my major, I often feel pressured.
So, when i feel like that, i want to go outside and take a walk.
When I start walking, I feel more comfortable.
I'm not thinking about my major or any complicated things, and just seeing people walking around the street.
in doing that, bad thoughts in my head are blown away.
When I get back home after walking, I have more attention about my work.

My second hobby is listening to music.
you know, Im studying for server developer so half of my day I'm typing a code.
coding is interesting, but i often get bored. that's why i listen to music to make the boredom go away.
Not only typing the code but also listening to music makes me more attentive.
I think i listen to music about 4 or 5 hours in a day.
My favorite genre is hiphop music and my favorite artist is asap rocky.
he is a famous rapper, fashion model and also my role model.
-state the reason-
I recommand his song, the name asap forever.
thank you.

homework

-state the reason-
좋아하는 음악에 대해서 이유 적기.
곡에 대해서도 마찬가지

친구에 대해서 설명. sample.

Having a friend has made me happy in a million
ways. I enjoyed my friendship with my high
school friends. We shared joys and audible
laughter that we couldn’t explain when we
were together. I have got many friends in my
high school days. We loved to hang out and go
to the beach after exams. We love to go to
singing rooms and watching movies together.
Our friendship became a habit that we love to
stay together all the time. I appreciated all the
things we did, and the way we showed our care
to everyone. They are the kind of friends that
only heaven could have sent me. They are gifts
that gold cannot buy, blessings that are rare
and true, they are the gift of a wonderful friend
like the friend that I have in them.

일반적인 것에 대해서 쓰든가
내가 받고 있는 impression들에 대해서 적기

feedback

  1. attension -> attention

  2. me -> i

  3. 형식 생각하면서 말하는게 가장 필요. 주어 동사가 항상 먼저 나온다 그리고 목적어나 보어, 수식어등을 생각.

  4. 아직 내 영어 실력을 인지하는게 중요. 정확히 전달하는데 포인트를 맞출 것. 그러려면 멋있는 문장이 아니라 정확한 기초적인 문장을 만드는게 좋음.

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