Hello, Mr. Heo min-seok.
I can't tell you who am I, but I read Minseok's comment and leave a reply.
But as an expert in this field,I would like to give you some advice.
Don't be shocked or disappointed about what I have to say.
Because you're just a sophomore in college.
First of all,you left no source of the materials used in your writing.
It's a big mistake,and you have to fix it.
Secondly, the writing is very confusing.
In other words,The context of sentences that readers cannot understand and legibility of sentences are very poor.
Finally, the accuracy of information is very very poor.
This means that the writer's ability are not yet sufficient enough to write.
You still need to improve your skills, stop playing. Do you understand Alex??
But don't give up.I will always support you.
I believe you'll understand if I tell you this much.
I'm sure you realize something.
Oh,and stop ostracize and picking on your friends... I know you're the main culprit.
I believe you will fix your personality and behavior.
For the last time,don't ever try to figure out who am I.
I will always keep an eye on you.
Bye-

Dear.Alex Hur